Monday, June 20, 2011

The Bachelor's Wedding - Reprise

There is a ton of stuff I love about The Bachelor's Wedding.  I do love a plucky heroine, and Araminta fits the bill.  I adore how she deals with the recalcitrant teenagers. Here are a couple of clips from my discussion thread:
  •  Dread Pirate Alice...or Alice the Supposedly Anaemic. On the strength of some doctor a couple of years before informing Alice the Gigantic Pill that she needed to lead a quiet life, she made a career of it. No energy for cooking, cleaning or grocery shopping, but plenty for buying trashy clothes and going out with her friends. [Betty Keira] I love the idea of her marrying a fat American millionaire who showers her with lurex gowns and gaudy jewelery. [Betty Debbie] I can't see her marrying an American Millionaire. Alice is pure trailer trash. She's more the type to get knocked up and live on the dole, spending her days watching the telly and getting fat. Since the doctor's 2 year old recommendation, she hasn't been back. I'm in love with Jason for shooting her down at their first meeting. "I'm sure you must be relieved to know that...whatever it was your doctor diagnosed has apparently cured itself..." Jason must not believe that there's anything to DNA...
  • Mrs. Pretty. Best use of occasional household help in a Neels novel. "...a lady whose appearance had nothing to do with her name; she was a big bony woman, nudging sixty, with a craggy face and a disconcerting squint. She had a powerful voice, smoked like a chimney, and had an elaborate hair-do which was tinted an unsuitable chestnut with highlights." She was a treasure. I especially like that she calls Araminta "my lovely". No one had ever called her that before. How did they stand the smoke smell in their house?

Nothing like this ever happens in the book.

The Bachelor's Wedding was a well-liked novel in my library but with this reading, and the attention to structure and character and the copious notes taken, I began to see more. Let's go, then:

Surgeon Jason Lister lives in a Regency house in London, has a cottage in north Essex, two married sisters (who we get to know and everything), two golden Labs (Goldie and Neptune), spectacles (he must be half-blind when he reads because he wears them a lot), a dark gray Rolls Royce and reads Homer, Juvenal and Horace in the original...of course. I do not know his age but I guess mid-thirties.
Araminta Smith (yes Araminta of The Araminta fame) is twenty-three and, by his description, "Plain...nicely plump, large dark eyes, and a very direct manner." She is also saddled with the two most useless relations in all Neeldom. Alice (as in Mao, Stalin, Hitler and Alice) and her father who goes around in the background muttering things like, "I gave Alice the housekeeping to buy a faux-leather coat. You're hard, Araminta" and other similar guilt-inducing lines.

Jason's sister's husband is sick in Chile (somewhere with something--we never know what) and she needs him to get a temporary nanny so that the 13-year-old Gloria and the 15-year-old Jimmy can come stay with him and his two trusted but old retainers. Hmmm...Two kids would upset a house that much? I would have said no, Araminta. Still, she's dispatched to Tisbury to collect the horrors, pour tea down everyone's throats and bring them to London.

They stay in London. The children don't do anything like light her braids on fire but that is probably only because they couldn't find the matches and she wears a bun. They are rude, disagreeable and constantly begin arguments about not picking up their clothes or unpacking or raising a finger by starting each sentence with, "Patty doesn't..." or "Patty always does it..." (Patty is their nursery-maid cum slave who is away with a dying mother.)
She also takes the children back to Tisbury after the week for another week or two. Jason sees her occasionally and reads the kids the riot act for treating Araminta like a servant (which she is, in a way, so I don't get why it's so outlandish that she should eat in the kitchen with the staff). He thinks to himself that it might be nice, having a wife like Araminta, being a buffer and a friend.
When she returns to London she gets to hear that her father and sister have been running up bills (never with a credit card...always just a 1995). She gets a part-time job ("I hope you're strong.") tending a cranky geriatric woman whose only occupation in life is spoiling sheets and berating the help. But it's okay because Jason's shown up and whisks her off to lunch where he proposes, beginning with a line most calculated to have the butter dish upended over his head, "I have decided to take a I must settle for second-best." He then makes her quit her job which should offend my feminist sensibilities but never does.
Bloody Alice and Finkish Father react with typical selflessness and the upshot is that Araminta walks down the aisle on her father's arm (who was probably bribed to be there--her sister, receiving no incentive, fails to show up) in a new suit bought from proceeds that Jason secretly channeled through her father. And, as in the old game Telephone, funds were lost in the transfer. That's right. Jason is the U.N., Araminta is a starving Serb and her father is a Balkan warlord.
She takes up tapestry work (you know what that means), goes through the linen closets (always the first order of business for a newly-wedded bride) and spends no time wondering why none of his family was invited to the wedding--and neither should you. It's not important.

And then they go shopping. Bless our Neels heroes for their stubborn adherence to the maxim that if some clothes are good, more clothes are better. But then he ruins it by failing to be properly bowled over by a nut brown crepe-de-Chine with a wide Quaker collar and cuffs in cream silk.
To illustrate: A hot Quaker...well, Puritan.
Hmmm. I too fail to understand why he would fail to be bowled over. Anyway, his inattention brings her attention to the fact that she would like his attention. To Harrods!
Some lipstick and powder applied with liberality and a soft rose-colored lamp finish the job. His eye is caught. Alice the Red and Finky Father have to be dispatched--which they are--to Bournemouth (a mere 86 miles away--which isn't as far as it needs to be) and their house is sold. Of course Jason did it. So, follow me here. The price for Araminta's happiness stands somewhere in the vicinity of a hundred thousand pounds. Have I mentioned I love Jason?
A storm comes, a nephew is saved, his leg is set (ew.) and a lot of Burberry is tossed about.

Enjoyable kissing!
The end.

Wrap Up:
Until the wedding (on page 144) this is Jason's book. His progression from uninterested employer to unwilling friend to convenient fiancee is plotted along an unbroken line. There are no great leaps in logic and, I suppose, if one were planning a marriage of convenience this would be the way it came about. I take issue with his last name, however. Lister. Fine enough on its own merits but her name is Araminta and those young relations of his are one freak brainwave away from calling her Auntie Listermint.

Araminta consults a vicar when she wants to know if she should marry Jason. Actual religious duties of this nature are not unheard of but on the rare side for Neeldom.

Gloria and Jerry go to their rooms and play loud music on their "record players" in 1995. In that year it might have been Coolio's Gangsta's Paradise. Just saying.

Most un-Betty line: "I must stop drooling."

Queen of Puddings. There are some seriously charming bits and the best line ever delivered to an awful child:
"We always do what we want," declared Gloria.
"So do I."
The couple are likable from beginning to end and if Dread Pirate Alice and the Fink are a mite two-dimensional, I humbly submit that 220 pages is on the short side for nuance.
Araminta plots her attack on the heart of her husband with a touching faith in the power of Harrods but is borne out in the end so there must be something to it.


  1. Betty Barbara here--
    I can't stop laughing, because my experience with the book was so different. I could NOT remember anything about it from reading it a year ago, so I re-read it. And even now, if I didn't have your synopsis in front of me, I'm not sure just how much I would remember.
    I thought that if ever there was a candidate for a 'ghost-written' book, this was it (except for the fact the medical man wasn't Dutch).
    Dread Sister Alice and Financially Feckless Father bordered on one-dimensional, for me. Vicky (the token Veronica) wasn't on page long enough to be a threat. As a matter of fact, I found the whole book (gasp!)BORING.
    So, this Betty gives it a Treacle Tart or even a Madeira Cake.

  2. The thing I just can't get over is the extremely silly bit at the end where they go from the cottage back to London and then to find his nephew. What, the friends Jimmy was with can't go look? No one in the village can? And they waste 3 or 4 hours going back to London first?

    Alice probably ended up married to some two-bit con artist who convinced her he had money.

  3. I agree--it's totally a page-count padder. Still, the wind blows authentically!

  4. Betty Barbara here--
    Hi kitap! I had the same thoughts, but I figured (without actually digging out a map)that the weekend cottage was on one side of London (say south) and the sister's home was on the other side (say north), thus they had to go through London to get from Point A to Point B. That would be this only thing that would make sense of the digression to London.

    1. Very smart, Betty Barbara, just the other way over: cottage in Ashdon (say North), sister's home in Tisbury (say South - well sort of) and you've got the route mapped out .
      Betty Who Looked at the Maps in Her Travel Guide and Remembered This Discussion Point Anonymous

  5. I thought the threat of what Father and Alice might do next was removed too early and things then flagged a bit.

    The journey would have been south to London then west to find Jimmy I think - it does seem tagged on.

    1. I thought Father de Leech-Ingrate and Alice de Sponge had done enough damage. The last time I re-read the story, about a week ago, I got upset just about every time they appeared on the scene. It was always about delicate-my-foot Alice needing a new garment, Alice the Malice complaining about Araminta leaving them in the lurch. And when Alice was not there, she had gone to the cinema with a friend, she was out with friends, "she deserves a little jaunt", off with friends down to Brighton, "she needed a breath of sea air". I got sick every time Father smiled at Araminta. It usually meant he expected her to pay for something. blech

      So, I for one was awfully glad when Jason removed them from the scene.