For installment one, look here. Installment two is right here, and installment three here.
THE HUGE ROSES (working title)
copyright 2014 by Betty van den Betsy; not for reprint or publication without permission
Chapter Two, part 2
A thick, oversized sweater over her
flannel pajamas, sturdy, fleece-lined boots on her feet, and her brother’s
battered old ski parka topping the lot, Tory tromped to the front door. Just a few yards down the street, she saw a
shiny new Mercedes – a big one – angled awkwardly into the ditch that bordered
the street. Covered in snow, the sharp
drop-off was impossible to see. With
Jennet and Hal floundering happily ahead of her, she made her way to the car to
offer assistance. The driver had already
emerged to inspect the situation, and with a shock she recognized the blond
giant she had met weeks before in Amsterdam!
Before she could call a greeting,
the dogs began their own, barking and leaping clumsily through the foot-deep
snow. “Good mor – Hal! Jennet!
Quiet!” Tory shouted. “Come back
here!” But her ill-mannered companions
had already reached their target.
“Not to worry, please,” Dr. van den
Nie called. “I like dogs.” As he fondled first one and then the other,
rubbing behind their ears in the magical dog spot, the animals showed they
clearly liked him, too. Jennet leaned
bonelessly against him, enjoying the patting, while the impatient Hal butted
his new friend’s legs, flattened himself in the snow with tail wagging, turned
a quick circle, and barked encouragingly for attention.
“I am so sorry,” Tory said,
catching up. “You would think they’d
never been out in public before. And I’m
sorry you’ve run into trouble with your car.
The road drops off sharply at the edges.
I’ll try to help you get it out if you like, but those are rear-wheel
drive, aren’t they? I bet it will need
towing. If you’d like to phone from my
house, you’re very welcome to stop here until a truck can make it out. Oh,” she paused, suddenly
self-conscious. “I don’t know if you’ll
remember me. I was in Amsterdam earlier
in the month, when you helped an English tourist with a broken leg.”
“Indeed I do remember you,” the
doctor answered, “and I’m delighted to see you here. Miss Bird, isn’t it? Or Nurse Bird. You make a regular habit of turning up just
in the hour of need, it seems.”
“Oh, yes. Right.
I mean, not really. And it was
last month, since today’s November.”
Tory stopped her dithering speech and took a deliberate breath, then
started over. “Please, do call me
Tory. We’re much less formal with names
here than people in the Netherlands.”
“Then I shall be Max,” he answered,
holding out an elegantly gloved hand. “Max
van den Nie is the full-length version. I
do think you’re very right that recovering my car will require more than you
and I can accomplish together. If you’re
quite sure, I’m pleased to accept your invitation for shelter. It will be very welcome.”
Tory felt her cheeks warm as they
shook hands, and hoped to goodness she wasn’t blushing – but knew she probably
was. She could only hope Max would put
her reddened cheeks down to the cold air, and turned to lead the way back to
the house. He followed, having grabbed a
small case from the abandoned vehicle.
“Well, here’s the house, and of course I’m sure you’re welcome. We New Englanders are proud of our
hospitality, you know. And you’re hardly
dressed for a tromp through the snow.”
“I’m not equipped for a drive
through the snow, either,” he responded.
“I ought to have pulled off when I encountered it, but the highway was
well cleared, and after a long flight the thought of getting to a comfortable
home was too tempting. If I had known of
the conditions when I arrived in Boston, I might have stayed there.”
“My sister’s in Boston, and they
hardly ever get snow when we do,” Tory commiserated. “Have you just come from Amsterdam? And are you staying here in Bristol? We’re not really on the way to much of
anywhere.”
Max laughed. “Do you know an orthopedist named Josh
Brown? I’m to stay at his house for a
few weeks and take on some of his practice while he recovers from a complex
ankle break.”
“Oh, yes, I know Josh. He lives just a few miles from us, and since
I work for the local family doctor, I get to know pretty much everyone in
town. It’s a small place, anyway, and I
have a brother and sister who’ve needed orthopedic assistance more than a few
times. But how do you know him?”
“We met at a medical conference
several years ago, and have stayed in touch.
I’m working with him and a few others at the hospital here on some ideas
to help athletes return to full participation in sport after accidents. As much as we get done via e-mail and file
sharing, I’ve been looking for an opportunity to spend some time at the
research center here. Poor Josh’s
accident offered an excuse.”
“I saw Sheila – his wife – a week
or so ago,” Tory offered, pushing open the front door and gesturing a welcome,
“and she told me he’s been a miserable patient, but everyone at the clinic is
too afraid of him to make him behave.
Apparently he’s so embarrassed about crashing his bike that he’s trying
to make a super-fast recovery.”
“Yes, that sounds quite right. In fact, he was trying to jump rope on his
one good leg recently, and set his recovery back quite a bit jostling his
cast. So Sheila is forcibly removing him
from the center and taking him to a facility in Maryland, where the staff can
treat him like any other patient. It is
humbling sometimes to see how very imprudent many in my profession can be when
we’re in our patients’ place. I often
see colleagues doing things in recovery that they would condemn in the people
they care for.”
“The surgeon’s god complex carrying
over from the operating room,” Tory laughed, then stopped abruptly. “I’m sorry, I hope that didn’t sound
rude. I always think you do so much
good, and sometimes so dramatically, that you have a right to a complex –
especially with open heart and organ transplants and that kind of thing.” She stammered to a halt.
“Goodness, Tory, you’re welcome to
say what you like. I expect you were
joking, and in any case, you should, indeed, speak up if you see someone
suffering delusions of grandeur. That
can be plain dangerous in operating theater or examining room. But how solemn I am! Please extend some more of your New England
generosity and believe I’m not deliberately being pompous!”
“Of course not,” she chuckled. “You set a great example of generosity. Here, let me take your coat. I can hang it by the stove so it drips onto
the hearth, and I guess you’d better take off your shoes. Do you have a change in your bag?”
“My track shoes – or runners? No, what do you call athletic shoes?”
“Sneakers, sometimes, or running
shoes, tennis shoes, that kind of thing.
You’ve got a bit of an accent that seems more English than Dutch to
me. Did you learn to speak English in
England?”
“Partly that,” he answered, “but I
learned your language in Holland from the time I was quite young, with the help
of my English grandmother and that lovely, old-fashioned tradition, an English
nanny. My native languages are Dutch and
Fries – and both of those are so difficult that few people outside our country
learn them. So, as you probably know,
most of us learn at least one or two other languages from childhood.”
“What’s Fries?” Tory asked, adding
quickly, “Wait, don’t explain yet. Come
through to the kitchen and we can call for a tow truck, and I’ll start some
breakfast. Have you eaten?”
“Breakfast would be very welcome,”
Max replied. “What a delightful house
this is. It has great warmth and
character. Have you lived here long? Forgive me if the question is too personal,
please.”
“Not at all. If that’s what you consider a personal
question, you are in for some culture shock here! Believe it or not, my mother’s great-grandparents
built the place when they married about 150 years ago, and it’s passed down to
sons and daughters ever since. Though I
suppose 150 years doesn’t sound that long to you, does it?”
Max chuckled, a deep, warm sound in
the stone-floored kitchen. “I’m afraid
my family home in Amsterdam is about 400 years old,” he admitted. “What’s more, I’m not aware of any case where
a daughter got to inherit. Still, I’m a
strong proponent of a family headquarters that spans the generations.”
Tory, having found the number for
the local repair shop, got back to business.
“The phone’s right on the wall,” she said. “I’m afraid it’s likely there won’t be anyone
there yet, but you can leave a message and have them call you back here. The power’s out, but the phone’s usually very
reliable in bad weather, and that will help save your cell phone battery.” After checking with his car-rental agency,
Max put through a call to the local mechanic while Tory began scrambling eggs
on the old gas stove.
Many hours later, having waved her
unexpected guest goodbye, she padded back into her kitchen to slump at the
well-scrubbed wooden table and reflect on an extraordinary – yet very ordinary
– day. Max had settled into the old
farmhouse like he’d been born there.
After getting through four eggs, a mound of hash browns and copious
amounts of toast, he had pitched in on the dishwashing like an expert. That chore finished, he volunteered to help
with the shoveling. Dressed in oddments
from his carry-on and Tory’s brother’s wardrobe, finished off with her father’s
hip waders, he’d done yeoman work on the front walk and driveway. Then, while Tory made soup and sandwiches for
lunch, he’d tackled some of the ancillary pathways.
Over lunch, he’d filled Tory in on
the history of Frieseland, a part of the Netherlands with its own unique
language and culture. She had to do some
guessing, since Max kept his narrative largely impersonal and always modest,
but she inferred that his family was ancient, close-knit and prominent. The conversation did give her a chance to
thank him again for the symphony tickets he’d kindly provided in
Amsterdam. “I’m delighted you were able
to use them,” he said. “My mother sang
your praises, as well. She thought you deftig, and you should know there’s no
better compliment my mother can bestow.”
“Deftig,” Tory mused. “That’s
one of those words that doesn’t translate well, isn’t it? I think someone told me it means elegant or
chic or distinguished, which doesn’t seem like me, actually. Anyway, it’s a lovely compliment.”
She hadn’t meant to be funny, but
Max’s chuckle rumbled out. “But the
graciousness with which you’ve welcomed me here, and your ease and
self-possession, are the kind of elegance the word encapsulates. Mother has a fine eye for those qualities.”
She was blushing again, and jumped
up quickly, gathering dishes. “How very
nice of you to say, and of her, too,” she said quickly. “I’m sure she’s very deftig, much more than I. At
least, I think I’m sure she is!”
After their morning’s hard work,
Tory recommended a restful afternoon, and they had alternated reading from the
Bird family’s extensive bookshelves with a few hands of gin rummy until the
sound of a booming engine broke into the living room. The plow had finally arrived, and the two of
them headed out to meet it.
“Hey, Patrick,” Tory called, waving
to the local man driving the truck. He
pulled to a halt in front of the house, and pointed toward the Mercedes. “Colin will be along to help your friend out
of the ditch,” he promised. “We tried to
phone but didn’t get an answer.”
“We were out shoveling all
morning,” Tory explained. “And with the
power out, the answering machine wouldn’t have picked up. It doesn’t have a battery; I should have
thought of that.” Patrick grunted a
reply in typically laconic New Hampshire style.
“Give a holler if you need anything,” he added, and maneuvered the plow
carefully past the stuck car.
Colin had been equally economical
with both words and motions. With a bit
of help from Max, his truck had the Mercedes back on the road quickly, where
they could see the damage had been minimal.
One tire change later, her surprise visitor was bidding Tory good-bye. “I’m sure we’ll meet around the town over the
next few weeks,” he said as they shook hands.
“I look forward to getting to know all my new neighbors, if I may go by
the standard you set for consideration and welcome.”
His lavish compliment set Tory to
stammering and blushing again. Before
she became hopelessly entangled in counter-thanks and disclaimers, Max had
leaned down from his great height and kissed her, very lightly, on each
cheek. “The continental style,” he’d
explained, and swung around, sliding gracefully into the powerful Mercedes before
putting the car into gear. Thankfully,
Tory had had – just barely – the presence of mind to reply in kind to his
farewell wave before pressing her mittened hands against her cheeks. “Oh, my,” she breathed, watching her breath
fog in the cold air. “Oh, my.”
Our Tory. What a dear little chatterbox! Oh, my!!!
ReplyDeleteI didn't see this one coming. Awesome. An orthopedist, and Max a specialist with a new technique for speeding and ensuring recovery of athletes. Very modernized version of Betty's doctors who come in to demonstrate new techniques.
ReplyDeleteThese are the only ones I remember. There must be others?
A Secret Infatuation: valve replacements
Esmeralda: orthopedics
Catherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
Interesting question. I found a few more doctors with new / their own techniques. But the Great Betty does not always elaborate...
DeleteWish with the Candles
There's a lobectomy at half past two; he'll be using his new technique, so there'll be an audience in the gallery
Cruise to a Wedding
...he worked fast and thoroughly, and not until he reached the stage where his own new technique was involved did he speak more than a few words
The Awakened Heart
There was this super man operating—Professor something or other. He's from Holland—a pal of Mr Bellamy's—and over here to demonstrate some new technique.
A Girl Named Rose
DeleteMr Werdmer ter Sane was operating; nobody had attempted that particular surgery in England, although he had had success with two cases in Vienna, so that he would take the lead, inaugurating a new technique
A Christmas Wish
Handed over several new techniques, shared his ideas with Mr Jenks
The Gemel Ring
Professor van Tijlen is outstanding in surgery, you know, and this particular operation is of his own technique
A Girl in a Million
...he is so very good with children and has [...] a technique with anaesthetics especially for children and for those who need special treatment with an anaesthetic
Sun and Candlelight
...he and Sarre worked closely together in a technique which the pair of them had devised
orthopedic surgery + osteopathy
It was unusual for orthopaedic surgery and osteopathy to join forces so closely, but it appeared to work well. The clinic, she had been told, had been going for five years now and Wienand had told her proudly that their treatment had resulted in success for at least seventy per cent of their patients. 'And that doesn't include the improvements,' he added ...
Thanks for finding these. I recognized the theme as one of Betty's reasons for why her RDD were a step above the rest (ignoring the unsurpassed good looks, a head-full of hair (albeit graying), impeccable doctoring skills, money, sophistication, iron-will, and uber-alles knowledge, of course).
DeleteCatherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
I'm loving your wonderful story! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteApropos of nothing...
ReplyDeleteGina Fratini – Pinafore
"What? " you will say, "Gina Fratini? A pinafore? Huh?"
Today, when I turned on my computer I saw a Betty from Montrouge, France, online and I asked myself, how many times was France mentioned throughout the Canon.
And, of course, I got sidetracked. When I clicked on Stars Through the Mist, © 1973, and I came upon a Gina Fratini model.
Gina Fratini model for the evening—white silk, high-necked and long-sleeved, pin-tucked and gathered and edged with antique lace.
So I looked for images of Gina Fratini dresses. There are quite a few on Pinterest, which is where I found this Fortnum & Mason advertisement from 1973: Gina Fratini is now in Miss Fortnum. Pinafore embroidered either in Petal Pink or or Sea Blue 10 – 14 £ 168.00
Thank you for sharing. Love the dress--I'm sure it would have been very stylish on Lauren Bacall.
DeleteBut, um, how many times did she mention France? Do tell!
Catherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
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DeleteHow many times did she mention France? Sorry, I did not attempt to count the number of times. (I would have had to read the whole of The Great Betty's Å“uvre...) But it was mentioned more often than I thought it was. In fact, I was amazed when I saw the list of novels on my computer screen. Also, I noticed that quite often it is "the south of France".
DeleteThank you. I could only remember two stories:
Delete- The almost 18-year-old ward of the RDD was in Paris. The RDD married for convenience to have a role-model for his ward.
- The RDD's fiancé was in Paris (or maybe the South of France. The RDD drove like 12 hours one-way to spend the weekend there. It wasn't for passion but to catch the fiancé in a position where she would break the engagement (and probably marry and American).
Can anyone help with the titles of these stories?
Anyway, speaking of driving all over Europe in a great honking Bentley, I wonder at how rich the RDDs really are. I remember one that said he was a millionaire in gulden, but not rich enough for his fiancé. A million is really not enough money to also drive a Bentley. Bentley Motors in Las Vegas (http://www.lasvegas.bentleymotors.com/Current-Models/Current-Model-Overview/) sells my favorite for about US$400,000! (About a quarter-million British pounds or 300,000 Euros.)
Catherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
The first one is The Convenient Wife.
DeleteI had to use my computer to find the second one. It could be Roses for Christmas
DeleteFulk went to Cannes to see Imogen and found her consoling herself with an American millionaire.
'An American millionaire is so much richer than a Dutch one, you know.' 'You're not a millionaire?' Eleanor wanted to know. 'Well, yes—at least, in Holland, I am.'
Yes! Here's the passage that struck me as so funny when I read Roses for Christmas (and why that trip to France was so memorable to me). BTW, according to Yahoo Maps and Google Maps, it's 918 miles from Groningen, Netherlands to Cannes, France, taking the shortest route, or almost 1000 on the scenic route with no toll roads. In addition to not knowing how to drive, Betty apparently didn't understand that cars don't drive as the crow flies--they have to follow the roads! I can just see her taking out a metal compass (remember those from trigonometry), and putting a metal tip in Gronigen and another in Cannes, and then using the map legend to estimate the 'about 750 miles'. :)
DeleteAnd so, from Roses for Christmas:
'You're never going to drive all that way and then back again by Tuesday?'
...'It's too far,' declared Eleanor wildly.
'Roughly seven hundred and fifty miles--fifteen hours' driving on excellent roads.' He smiled thinly. 'If it makes you feel better, I shall only drive six or seven hours before I rack up for the night. I should be in Cannes some time during tomorrow afternoon.'
'But coming back?' she persisted, and then drew a sharp breath as he said blandly: 'I haven't been so fussed over since I had a nanny.'
Betty didn't drive so perhaps it was a bit abstract to her.
DeleteBetty AnoninTX
I put the problem to my trusted routeplanner viamichelin:
Delete1464 km, that's 909 miles
14h50 – Hey, Betty was right about that, roughly fifteen hours' driving.
Roses for Christmas, © 1975
DeleteAlas, Fulk drives a Panther de Ville not a socking great Bentley.
Panther De Ville: Price at launch in 1974.: £21,965 which equalled Æ’l 139,050 (gulden)
Couldn’t find the price of a Bentley in the1970‘s, but to give you an idea of the price of a Bettyesque motor car back then here is the price of a Rolls Royce Camargue:
Wikipedia:
The recommended price of a new Camargue at launch on the UK market in March 1975 was £29,250, including sales taxes (which equalled fl 167,690 gulden)
When it was launched, the Camargue, which was the flagship of the Rolls-Royce lineup, was the most expensive production car in the world, eventually selling in North America for approximately US$147,000 ($588,000 in 2008 dollars).
I really enjoy your research talents! Thank you. You're amazing. :)
DeleteI looked up a currency converter for 1975 and found that the conversion rate was US$3.308 to the pound. (http://www.likeforex.com/currency-converter/british-sterling-pound-gbp_usd-us-dollar.htm/1975). There must be a price increase between 29,250 GBP in England and the 147,000 USD in the US--probably import taxes.
According to the inflation calculator, $147,000 in 1975 would be $641,502 in 2014! (http://www.usinflationcalculator.com/) So the Panther De Ville is even more precious than a Bentley!
Now about that Mercedes in The Huge Roses--What model would the RDD drive? Perhaps an S550 or an S63 AMG?
Hello, there Betty Barbara! I see you. :o)
ReplyDeleteI wonder... Later, was Tory embarrassed about the RDD seeing her in her grey flannel pj's?
Hello Bettys,
ReplyDeleteI discovered Betty Neels just this month. The first one I read was nice, but nothing more. I was sure that in a 134 book career the quality probably varried. So I found your amazing and wonderful site. I'm working my way through the books that made it to the finals. Love them. Charming, delightful books.
The 79 nurses document is incredible and helpful. The reviews and comments here are hilarious.
I wonder why Fate is Remarkable isn't in print. Is it just me, or is it the only one of her books that isn't available?
135, actually. :-) I bought almost all my books used anyway. What aggravates the tar out of me (Texas speak) is that Fate Is Remarkable is not available on the Kindle. I wish everyone would go to Amazon and request it. If you look up the title, there is a link down on the right side of the page you click to tell the publisher you want to read it on your Kindle. Just one click. Easy to do.
DeleteBetty AnoninTX
Mills and Boon sells it in e-book format. You have to download a free e-reader, but you can at least read it on your computer or a tablet.
DeleteFate is remarkable
http://www.millsandboon.com.au/product/9781460897966
Catherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
Excuse me, Betty AnoninTX, I "visited" Amazon.com and I did see a Kindle edition of Fate Is Remarkable
DeleteKindle Price: $5.46 includes VAT* & free international wireless delivery via Amazon Whispernet
Here is the link.
I should specify in the US. When I am logged in and go to that Amazon link, it says this title is not available for purchase.
DeleteI had the brilliant idea of purchasing my missing titles from amazon uk, but amazon will not let me. All Betty titles are available for the kindle in the uk. Yes, I actually checked. :-)
In the US, all but 9 are available. The four novels unavailable are Fate Is Remarkable, Saturday's Child, The Girl with Green Eyes, and Three for a Wedding. Also unavailable here are five of the novellas, called shorts on amazon uk: Christmas Romance, Dearest Eulalia, Ordinary Girl, Doctor's Girl, and The Proposal. Four of those titles are in my top ten!
I, of course, could walk over to my shelves and pull off the actual book to read (regular or large print, hahaha). But I'm strangely in love with my Kindle. We have a very close relationship.
Betty AnoninTX (who is frequently wrong)
I am sorry. When I go to Amazon.com (Books) it shows a different "catalogue" from the one on Amazon.de. I thought it was the same for the Kindle Store. I often go to Amazon.co.uk and Amazon.com when I look for books I cannot find on Amazon.de. Well, I think it is pretty mean of them to dangle the kindle book in front of your nose and then to say, "You can't have it!"
DeleteI'm not sure anyone will ever see this, but I shall post it anyway.
DeleteAmazon now has the book with The Doctor's Girl available for the Kindle (Marrying a Doctor: The Doctor's Girl\A Special Kind of Woman). In November, An Ordinary Girl (The Engagement Effect: An Ordinary Girl\A Perfect Proposal) will be available. I'm still campaigning for the other 7 not available in the US.
Betty AnoninTX
Thank you Betty van den Betsy for a delightful update. I love the Americanism. Call me Tory, indeed. It was very bettyesque. The stranded vehicle, our hero and heroine working diligently in the snow and his impersonal account of Friesland.
ReplyDeleteKeep it coming!