For installment one, look here. Installment two is right here, installment three here, and installment four here; installment five is here.
THE HUGE ROSES (working title)
copyright 2014 by Betty van den Betsy; not for reprint or publication without permission
Chapter Three, part 1:
Sunday morning showed the New Hampshire
scenery at its finest, with pure white snow frosting the evergreens under a
brilliant blue sky. The sun brought
enough warmth to make an early-morning walk tempting, so Tory pulled on her
fleece-lined snow boots and set out, with the dogs pushing along with her. They trudged down to the lake, which had a
thin coating of ice that cracked and shifted under Hal and Jennet’s
investigations. That early in the day,
almost no one else was about. The
minister drove past on his way to take early service, and Tory saw another
walker in the distance, but otherwise she had the beautiful scene to herself. She’d brought a camera along, with vague
thoughts of turning a picture into her Christmas card in another month or two,
and snapped a few photos of some of the more picturesque trees framing the
lake. In the muffled quiet of the
dripping day, she let her mind wander.
Peace and quiet, a serene morning,
a lovely, lonely scene – they were all important elements of her happy
life. Still, the lonely part sometimes felt too prominent a part of her days. Even when her parents were home, Tory
sometimes felt an almost-overwhelming yearning for company; for someone who
shared her interests and respected her views.
‘Not that Mom and Dad don’t respect me,’ she thought, then shouted to
the gamboling dogs, “but you know
it’s not the same!” She laughed aloud,
reveling in the feeling of independence and abandon that comes with stomping
the first set of footprints into a fresh snow.
She scooped a handful of snow from a convenient branch and formed a
ball, throwing it hard toward the dogs, who chased after it delightedly. They charged back toward Tory, undismayed
that their toy vanished on impact with the ground, and the three of them
continued to play their abortive game of fetch as they broke ground through the
pines toward the town.
She noticed her fellow walker
drawing closer around the lake’s edge, and felt a pleasant bubble of excitement
on recognizing the tall, smiling Dutchman.
Thinking he may have had quite enough of her company, she hesitated
about continuing toward him until his welcoming wave drew her forward.
“You’re a morning person,” he
greeted her, as the dogs accosted him with wriggles and head butts.
“Not always,” Tory admitted. “Though with these two around, sleeping in
just isn’t an option. It’s such a
beautiful morning, though, and this snow won’t last, so I thought I should get
out and enjoy it. We’ll be ankle-deep in
mud by Tuesday, I expect.”
“Isn’t this early for a snowstorm,
even in New Hampshire? Not that I prefer
mud.”
“It’s early for this much snow,
certainly. We usually get a few days in
November, though, and December through February should be pretty snowy. Of course, it’s not like it was when my
parents were kids!” Tory joked. She felt
an instant’s surprise that she could talk so easily with this accomplished,
impressive man.
“It never is, is it? My parents grew up skating on the canals of
Amsterdam as a regular recreation; these days the ice only gets thick enough
every five years or so.”
“Oh, I love ice skating!” Tory
exclaimed impulsively. “But I’ve never
felt comfortable doing it at an indoor rink.
It has to be a pond or lake for me.
I’d love to skate along the Amsterdam canals. It’s such a beautiful city.”
“I will say, I think we celebrate
the ice quite well in my hometown,” Max answered. “We put up impromptu cafés on the ice, and
serve erwtensoep – the
richest, most warming pea stew you can imagine.”
“We have to bring our
own supplies – usually just cocoa in a thermos.” Noticing a particularly graceful tree limb,
Tory raised her camera, aimed and shot a few images.
“You’re a
photographer?” Max asked.
“Very much an
amateur,” she answered. “I thought I
might find a pretty scene to use for my Christmas cards, though.”
“I expect my efforts
would be amateurish at the very best, but if you’d like me to take a photo of
you for consideration for the card, I’d be happy to do so.”
Tory gave it some
thought. She hadn’t ever included her
own photo in her annual Christmas mailing, but far-flung family and friends
often did so, and she appreciated seeing those visual updates. “That might be nice, actually,” she
said. “With the dogs, maybe – otherwise
it feels conceited. Or are the dogs too
twee?”
“Certainly not,” Max
said, after coughing awkwardly, twice. His
lids were lowered, a fact that barely registered as Tory looked around for a good
backdrop for a picture. Feeling self-conscious,
she tried to strike a natural pose, wondering how the doctor would get dogs,
snow-covered pine branches, and her into the frame. Maybe it was a silly idea – and he hadn’t
even had to talk her into it. Posing was
just not her style.
But Dr. Van den Nie
had the camera up and pointed so she grinned in his direction while pushing
Jennet’s head away from her knees and toward the camera. “That’s lovely,” he called. “I’m not much of a photographer, but I do not
believe anyone could fail, with such a beautiful scene for a subject.” A few more clicks, Tory desperately trying to
think of some way to start a conversation, and wondering what he’d meant by ‘a
beautiful scene.’ The pine trees,
surely? Before she could come up with
anything to say, he asked, “Would you want to kneel, to be closer to the dogs?”
“Sure, yes, right,” she said – and
was suddenly desperate not to
talk. And then, as he kneeled also, “Oh,
no, you shouldn’t... you wouldn’t... I mean, you’ll get wet. In the snow.”
“I’m dressed for it today,” he replied. “And I’m having fun. How about getting the dogs’ attention with a
snowball?” Tory did as he suggested, but
after a few more clicks, insisted on stopping the photo session. “Thank you so much,” she said. “I’ll sort through them at home.”
“It was a pleasure,” Max
answered. “You, Hal and Jennet are all
excellent models, though I’m afraid, ‘Work it, baby,’ aren’t words that come
easily to me.” He choked a bit with
laughter as he pronounced the incongruous phrase.
“Okay, this might sound a little stupid,
but I’d probably just get confused if you said something like that. I don’t watch a lot of TV, or even movies, so
I’m not up on slang and things as much as I should be. We get teenagers at the office of course, but
it’s mostly old people, so I hear ‘groovy’ and ‘hip’ a lot more than ‘work it,
baby.’”
“Two peas,” Max answered. “I suspect you’re a book lover, like me.”
“Mostly, yes,” Tory confessed. “I love music, too – Gregorian chants to hip
hop – and I like movies, but I can’t stand commercials so I can only watch pay
movies online, or on disc.”
“Have you seen any you enjoyed
especially recently?” he inquired, and they were off. Comedies, mysteries, classics. The doctor matched Tory’s reservations about
supernatural dramas with a dislike of most superhero films – “I admit I enjoyed
The Avengers.” – and they shared an
enthusiasm for Bollywood. Movies quickly
yielded to books, with recommendations, disputes and a strong connection over
the excellence of Cry, the Beloved
Country.
“My brother found a list of the 100
best novels of the 20th century somewhere, and that wasn’t on
it. It was the Modern Languages
Association or something, and I couldn’t believe it. That may be the best book I’ve ever read,”
Tory proclaimed.
“Absolutely,” the doctor agreed. “The language is so vivid, and the story such
an honest mix of tragedy and hope and ordinary human life, and the period he’s
describing is such an important one in the history of modern civilization, I’m
not just surprised by how overlooked it is, I’m close to appalled.” They both went quiet, Tory brooding on
unrewarded excellence as she listened to the shush of her boots through the
snow. The doctor spoke after a moment. “Let me guess what was on that list your
brother found – Joyce, right?”
“Oh, of course. I’ve never tried Finnegan’s Wake; have you?”
“At university. I was glad to have my tutor as a guide
through its mysteries.”
The peace and tranquility she’d
felt in the early part of her walk was transforming, becoming something shared.
She and Max talked as easily as she did
with her sisters and brother; as easily as she did with her closest friends in
college days, cross-legged on dorm room beds surrounded by nutrition and
anatomy textbooks. He wasn’t an
intrusion into the serenity of the morning, but an enhancement of the beauty of
the day and the joy of an invigorating walk with the dogs gamboling through the
morning. Tory noticed the comfort and
happiness she felt, but chose not to examine it too closely. One quick thought flitted through the part of
her mind that was detached from the conversation: it’s easy enough to have a pleasant chat
about books, especially when you’re trying to be agreeable.
The pleasure was undeniable,
though, and Tory regretted arriving at the fork in the path that would take her
back to the house. “Here’s where I
turn,” she told Max, who had been politely waiting for her to try to dredge an
author’s name from her memory. “Thanks
for your company. I hope you enjoyed
getting to see a bit of Bristol’s scenery.”
“I enjoyed it very much, indeed,”
Max answered with grave courtesy.
“You’ve been generous in sharing your time with me. I wonder if I could trespass further on your
kindness, and ask you to introduce me to some of the shops in the town. My friend Jaap will be coming over in a few
days to keep house for me, but until then I need to stock up on a few
necessities.”
“Sure, of course,” Tory said. “I’ve got a few errands to run after church,
so I could meet you on Beech Street, by Dr. Bachman’s office.”
“Would it be an imposition to join
you at church?” he enquired.
“Whatever the opposite of
imposition is,” Tory assured. “I’m
planning to drive, though, given the weather and the Sunday shoes issue.”
“If you’re willing to trust me
after yesterday’s mishap,” Max said, smiling, “I’d be happy to pick you up in my car.”
“Oh, of course. If you’re sure. Um, I’m, I guess I’ll go home, then, and
change, and I’ll be ready in about...” she checked her watch, “let’s say 45
minutes. That will give us a few extra
minutes for the roads, and still early enough to get in the front third of the
pews. Mr. Rourke’s voice is getting a
bit reedy.”
Max’s laugh boomed into the snowy
morning. “Lovely,” he said. “I’ll be with you in 45 minutes. Suits and ties?” he queried, one eyebrow quirked.
“If you like,” Tory reassured, “though plenty of
people wear slacks and sweaters, and some come in jeans.” She collected Hal and Jennet with a whistle,
and set off, kicking puffs of snow ahead of her with the delight of a small
child.
Thank you for another fun installment.
ReplyDeleteOh, my! How old I feel. When I read "The Avengers", I thought of John Steed and Emma Peel, not Marvel Comics.
I wonder if he quickly snapped a picture with his smartphone when she wasn't looking? In how many Betty books does the RDD have a picture of his beloved while waiting patiently for her to fall in love with him?
Love the series. Please keep on writing!
Catherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
I thought of John Steed and Emma Peel, too!
DeleteTwo peas! Great line. They are, aren't they? Of course they are.
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:) I see blips from all over the world when I stop by. This site is excessively diverting! I'm slowly making my way through the many years of reviews, analysis, discussion, and links to things Betty. I'm sorry I missed them in 'real-time' as they were created, but the entertainment value remains...like a Betty book...
DeleteCatherine (a Betty van den Wasatch)
Tory, snowshoeing, with one of the dogs
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful update. Two peas indeed. What a delightful conversation they had.
ReplyDeleteAnother great installment
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